Hello world!

Adhi raat pehr de tadke….
Akhan vich unindra radke.
Teri tohr vi surme vargi………
sajna de pind jandi sadke.
jo gall tethoo keh na hoi….
oho gall mere dil vich radke
Lo hi lo si saek nahi si……
Dekh liya mai jugnu fadke…!

अधि रात पहर दे तडके….
अखां विच उनिन्दरा रडके.
तेरी टौर वी सुरमे वरगी………
सजना दे पिंड जांदी सड़के.
जो गल्ल तेथों कह न होई….
ओहो गल्ल मेरे दिल विच रडके
लोअ ही लोअ सी सेक नही सी……
देख लिया मैं जुगनू फडके…!!!

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6 comments on “Hello world!

  1. namitasunder says:

    every time I read this one,it appears to be closer to the heart.

    namita

  2. JAGZ says:

    LO HI LO SI, SEYK NAHIN SI….., SAMAJH LEYA MAIN JUGNU PHADKEY……. KYA HI BAAT HAI, SUBHAAN ALLAH

  3. Oh so beautiful and touching; I had so far read Jugnus being compared to stars and the beacons of light. But you have added another dimension. Jugnu being illusions of warmth. Though they did show light yet they lacked the fire and the intensity. Wonderful and mind blowing. Anyways such experiences only add passion to the poetry. Regards Khuda tuhanu sachee agg wala jugnu milwaye. All the best and keep it up.

    • sandalisufi says:

      Thanks Avinash ji…Yes I have that jugnu…! But this poem is not mine, I have just quoted…I don’t know the poet even. But I liked this one SO VERY MUCH…!

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